While you are gone

While you are gone

 

 

Could you hear my heart break,

could you feel the sighs of my thoughts?

 

Do you know how much I miss you,

when your gone?

 

You say you will be back in no time at all,

even if it where for a day, eternity would feel longer.

 

Lips pressed against the empty lonely air,

hands reach for the the place you memories live.

 

The crowds are filled with imagines of you,

every sound hunts me with your voice.

 

Music no longer makes any sense,

the words they use seem meaningless.

 

The birds no longer visit,

caterpillars have made their cocoons.

 

Winter has fallen on my heart.

The fallen leaves remind me of how barren my life now feels.

 

When you come back,

the trees will bloom and the birds will sing your song.

 

The caterpillars will spring to life,

with wings, the images of you.

 

The songs will play,

as you walk in the crowds and the empty spaces will be filled.

 

The voices of you will be held in my heart,

and make every day come true.

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

what a special poem written right from your heart =The voices of you will be held in my heart,

and make every day come true. wow! just beautiful Ron.

[ron]

Thank you Maria...:) x

[Vidya Bacchus]

How did I miss this one .When you are not with the one you love a minute can seem like a lifetime.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes it does feel like that.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hope they get back soon Red.I will keep you company until they do yes ?

[ron]

Yes Vidya, your very sweet thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww not all that sweet but thank you and you are welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Music no longer makes any sense,

the words they use seem meaningless.



The birds no longer visit,

caterpillars have made their cocoons."

A sad write indeed.Feelings were tangible and tears were visible...Bravo.................

[ron]

Thank you Sami. You are most kind.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:).........................

[ron]

Love the new picture Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you kindly...:)......................

[s y e]

Oh Ron, a heartbreaking write that I can relate to... leaving someone so dear for even a day does indeed feelnlike an eternity. Just keep thinking positive and keep smiling, keep yourself busy and the time will fly...

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I will.