Lost in the words of your dreams

Lost in the words of your dreams

 

 

 

Like moon light shinning through the window,

you light up my dreams.

 

You caress my thoughts,

like gentle lovers hands.

 

My lips are yours to command...

command them, ask of them what you need.

 

Every part of me needing wanting,

to be part of your dream.

 

Write your poems and stories on my body,

take every inch and mark me with your pen.

 

Make you words a part of me,

as I become lost in your dreams.

 

Reviews

[Hope]

"Every part of me needing wanting,
to be part of your dream."
I LOVE these lines !! A great job done :) Always keep writing ! Good day :)

[ron]

Thank you very much. I will :)

[Hope]

You are most welcome ! :)

[s y e]

Someone is quite in love.... :) I think it's nice when you can take the backseat for a while and be showered with love from the one you're in love with or the one you like... splendid poem my sweet friend.

[ron]

Thank you sweet Sye. Yes sometimes it is.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sigh .You seem to be a very willing canvas Red.It is very nice when you feel this way.Totally letting yourself go and be completely taken by someone :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes it is. And its nice to let go and let the other one paint for a while.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes I think you are right.You are welcome :)