Moon light in your eyes

Moon light in your eyes

 

 

Lying next to you,

our fingers intertwined.

 

We look deeply in each others eyes,

our sighs make a melody of love.

 

Your lips curl slightly,

mine tremble.

 

You put my hand over your heart,

and yours over mine.

 

You whisper,

“can you feel them beat as one”?

 

I nod and whisper,

“yesss”.

 

Our lips barely touch,

just enough to feel the beating of our hearts.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and sensitive ride in your poem. The simple touches and embraces we cannot forget. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

Thank you Coyote.

[kublakhan27]

Gorgeous piece, full of innocence and charm...well done ron.

[ron]

Thank you kublakhan. You are very kind.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmmm this is one of the most touching thing I have ever read you :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. It still feels like I'm missing something to express how deeply I feel. Kind of like skipping rocks you can hit the surface but the water can run very deep. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

It is perfect to me but as writers we always feel as if maybe it could have been better .You are welcome :)

[Brianna Brie]

Sweet...sensual yet sentimental.

[ron]

Thank you Brianna. Your very kind.

[s y e]

So so so so romantic Ron. :) You have a thing for looking people's eyes, haha. This is so very sweet. The words of a man in love. :)

[ron]

-blushing- thank you Sye. Yes if a man was looking into the eyes of his love.

[s y e]

You're so hooked Ron... It's cute. I told you you'd find her. :)

[ron]

-sighing- time will tell dear friend.

[s y e]

Time will tell.

[ron]

I figure this time I will try for about 2 years before I know for sure. My last..ummm relationships feel abort about 2 years after they started. I hope this one works out...

[s y e]

Sorry to hear that. I hope this one works out.

[ron]

I hope so to. Do you think 2 years is enough time to see if it works out?

[s y e]

Yep. More than enough. I'd have given it one year

[ron]

Well for other reasons it has to be 2 years, maybe its suppose to take that long for this one. Life has it's reasons for how and why things happen when they do.

[s y e]

Yes it does that... Okay then, 2 years it is.

[ron]

I will let you know how it turns out.

[s y e]

Woohoo, thank you and I wish you all the best.

[ron]

Thank you Sye, you are very sweet.