Could you feel the love in my hands

Could you feel the love in my hands

 

 

 

I reach out to hold your hands in mine.

Could you feel the beating of my heart?

 

The way you make the trembling stop,

or how warm I get when you hold them?

 

My passion and desires trapped in my hands,

until you release them with your heart.

 

They caress your face,

and feel the warmth of your body.

 

Gently pressed against you,

afraid to touch because they are not worthy.

 

Afraid you will push them away,

never to hold you again.

 

How long they have waited,

to feel love once again.

 

Trembling,

afraid,

if these hands could cry they would,

they would cry a river of tears.

 

My mind whispers,

“please hold them,

my heart is in your hands”.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww love wrapped up in layers of need and want.Exactly a lovely combination luv :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Wait...wrapped up in layers of need and want, OMG NOOOO. I thought I was over the whole bondage thing, which we will never speak of. ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha let it be known once your into the bondage thing you can never go back.So I've been told.I am an angel so I know not about whips and leather I am just quoting people lol:)

[AprilRN1210]

Wow.... Such a gentle yet passion filled declaration of love. The hopeless romantic in me is trembling for you... I feel the fear, the hope, the relief, the sensation of stepping on that ledge ready to jump instead of fall for this lucky lady that has captured your heart. Amazing piece Ron;)

[ron]

Aww you are so sweet April. Yes love does tend to make us do things we normally wouldn't. It can strip our emotions naked for the one we love.

[AprilRN1210]

Naked is a good state to be in:)

[ron]

:) yes it is.

[Aguilar]

Aw absolutely beautiful I liked your poem :')

[ron]

Thank you Aguilar :)

[s y e]

Awwwwwww, I am smiling and sighing so much right now, this is the most romantic thing ever, Ron and one of my absolute favourites from you. I am sure she will make sure she doesn't break your heart because she will have me and my WC army to answer to. :-)

[ron]

Aww you are very sweet Sye. Ooo I have any Army on my side. I feel like I reenlisted...lol

[s y e]

LOL! That's quite funny, yes you do have an army.

[ron]

So who is the Commander of this Army?

[s y e]

Me of course.

[ron]

Salutes my Commander, "what are your orders Ma'am"?

[s y e]

Just chill... I'm keeping an eye on this lady that has captured your heart.

[ron]

Lol yes Ma'am. :)