Placed over the heart before the first kiss

Placed over the heart before the first kiss

 

 

 

Gently we place our hands over each others heart,

slowly our lips meet.

 

My heart races,

my hands tremble.

 

My lips are hungry,

for your kiss.

 

My tongue press through our lips,

waiting to know if yours wants the same.

 

My hand slides to your waist,

to pull your body closer to mine.

 

My other hand runs through your hair,

feeling how soft it is.

 

My first kiss with you,

seems so far away.

Author's Note

As I wrote this I realized that I have forgotten what a kiss feels like.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is sad that you have forgotten this wonderful thing.Your poetry says different though Red :)

[ron]

I have forgotten what a lot of things feel like. So for now I can only imagine what they would feel like.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well here's to great imaginations yes ?

[ron]

Yes. Since it's all I have I guess it will have to do for now.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Something is always going to be better than nothing hunny :)

[ron]

Thats true, besides if I ever get to feel those things again it will feel like the first time :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You may be right my dear.

[ron]

Ya im a reborn virgin...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

OMG that is so freaking funny lol.So does that mean you have forgotten how to umm you know?

[ron]

You mean how to make love?

[Vidya Bacchus]

LOL........yeah I must mean that .Told you no filter :)

[ron]

No I have not forgotten how to, just how it feels.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Don't worry I am sure you remember luv.You just think you don't :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya, you are very sweet to say so.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You know if people keep telling me that I am sweet I am going to start believing it lol

[ron]

Well its true Vidya you are very sweet.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww now you are making me blush.Thank you :)

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[s y e]

OMG, how I really wish for a kiss like that... how did you make a simple first kiss seen so sexy and sensual... I'm speechless. Wow.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I close my eyes and picture what I'm feeling and what it would be like. Umm I do that a lot when I write.

[s y e]

I figured you did that, aha

[ron]

Lol. I don't know how many other writers do that, maybe I'm just strange like that :)

[s y e]

Not strange. I think it's a good idea.

[ron]

I have found myself lost in the moment more than once doing it.

[s y e]

I think we all get lost in our poems.

[ron]

Sometimes I want what I am writing to come true. It would be wonderful if we could do that. I guess I'm just a silly dreamer.

[s y e]

Never silly... I'm a dreamer.

[ron]

Well I hope all your dreams come true Sye.

[s y e]

Yours too. :)

[ron]

I think if time is kind then my dreams will come true.

[s y e]

Mine too.... fingers crossed.

[ron]

It looks like time needs to step it up so we can have our dreams come true. Who ever he is he better know how you feel for him or I will go and set him straight. And the WC Army will have a few things to say to him as well.

[s y e]

Hahaha now thtu sounds like what I've been saying to you! Oh he knows alright.

[ron]

Lol good :)