What you do to me

What you do to me

 

 

 

Looking in your eyes,

I can see passion’s fire.

 

Feeling your touch,

I can hear your heart beat.

 

Your breath on my lips,

taste sweeter then any fruit.

 

Your lips,

embrace my soul and fill it with love.

 

Your fingers,

make my body need you more and more.

 

What you do to me cannot be read on a page,

felt in the ink,

breathed in beyond the touch of a feather.

 

You turn my passion into a furnace,

my love into the stars,

my needs cry out to be filled.

 

You make me complete when I’m with you.

I am empty when you walk just a few feet away.

 

I am bound to...

what you do to me.

 

Reviews

[Anita Singh]

"Your fingers, make my body need you more and more."
"You turn my passion into a furnace," Such wonderful lines you have written. You seem to have a sensual side too. thank you for sharing. :)

[ron]

Thank you and your welcome. I have been told I do...lol. Thank you again.

[s y e]

Aaaah, this is lovely and makes me feel like I'm in heaven on cloud 9

Simply a wonderful poem Ron.

[ron]

Aww thank you Sye. Your very sweet :)

[s y e]

Always a pleasure. It's any persons dream to have someone like this Ron.
You're not alone. :)

[ron]

Thank you Sye. It would be nice to talk with someone who does.

[s y e]

I'm sure it would be.

[:o]

I like your passion. You wrote this well.

[ron]

Thank you Lacey.

[:o]

My pleasure.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh to be done that way.Truly a lovely pen Red :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes it would be if it really happened.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Who knows maybe it hasn't happened yet.Something to look forward to I think yes?

[ron]

Yes, but I know it won't. It does make for a good day dream though.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh well cheers to daydreams :)

[Glass Heart Inc]

A poem that increases the speed of the heart. Well done.

[ron]

Thank you very much.