Uum... very impressive words, i`d love to read your few more stuffs today. You`ve spoken up to you so much in the few love-words with much emotions. Here, the love i`m finding in this poem and the misery and emotions too because where there`s love .. there`s drops of emotions. Lovely poem!
To be honest, pal .. I just loved these words...this poem`s well expressed with your feelings and I .. read moreTo be honest, pal .. I just loved these words...this poem`s well expressed with your feelings and I think, if you do write some more beautiful words to continue this write then this poem could be a great one indeed because if the only few words shown the feelings of love then suppose -- if you do write a big write on it, then how & what it`d bring something new as a new creations to you .. great! Anyway, keep writing, pal.
This was different from your other ones Ron. Short, sweet and lovely. As we hold love in our hearts, love holds us in its soul. Bravo..................
I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..