Black mascara and tears

Black mascara and tears

 

 

Walking the line of tears and fear,

could you see the tears that run down in black lines?

 

Would you care if you saw them in your veins,

and your heart beat?

 

Why must the pain be seen in the hallows of dreams?

 

Walk this line deep in thought and feeling,

how would you save my heart?

 

Beyond the edge,

past last nights of sighs.

 

Take this and run away,

I am a heart beat that flows in my own veins.

 

Could you hear it...

could you feel what I am in your dreams?

 

I am nothing...

I am the darkest parts of the tears that flow...

in dark lines down your cheeks.

 

I am...

the end of you.

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful...

I am nothing...
I am the darkest parts of the tears that flow...
in dark lines down your cheeks.

*sigh

[ron]

Thank you Ance ;)

[Matching Socks]

Welcome.....👍

[Bright Ocean Star]

Heart break is hard; it almost always seems like the person doing the breaking is the end of the other person....but that is just an illusion. Once the time and distance heals a bit, the tear streaked cheeks and running mascara stops and room is made in that person's life for another who will love them the way they need to be loved....but first, one person has to move out of the way. Beautiful write,Ron! I love it. You are an amazing poet. :)

[ron]

Wow thank you Bright Ocean Star. Yes you are right about having to heal before we can move on.

[MsJewel]

Oh....this just curls right up in my heart...
big hugs to you today (((((( ron )))))))

:) Julie

[ron]

Aww Thank you Julie :) big hugs back (((((Julie)))))

[ms. barrie]

heart wrenching, eloquently poignant, write ron. I agree with Noodlebumble...you're
far from a nothing... and if others are unable to realize that, than eff 'em!
you're a shining light with that bright heart of yours... full of generosity.

I enjoy the subtle darkness your imagery weaved into this write...followed
with as always amazing graceful dictation. shine on...and chin up, Mister!
xox :))

[ron]

Aww you are so kind Barrie :) thank you.
I wish it were true, but thank you. xox

[ms. barrie]

just honest, and i'm working on rectifying that! and yes
it's most definitely true, silly! you're very welcome you! xox :))))))))
*sends you some chocolate cookies*

[ms. barrie]

*edit, chocolate chip...that is

[ron]

Lol. Thank you for the cookies barrie :)

[ms. barrie]

anytime ron :)

[s y e]

Ron, you have so much potential and talent. You are so much more than nothing. You can never be the end of someone, you are the bright, beautiful future they have to look forward to.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. Guess I was just feeling useless and left.

[s y e]

You're not useless. Not to me or anyone here at the cafe. (:

[ron]

I know Sye, I just can't help it though.

[s y e]

I know, we all have those days. It'll pass then you'll be back to your jolly self.

[ron]

Maybe.....:(

[s y e]

You will, trust me. We'll all help you.

[ron]

I know and you all do help more then anyone knows.

[s y e]

That's good. See, you're strong, you'll be fine!

[ron]

I know and thank you so much Sye. :)xo

[s y e]

No thanks needed! x

[Konigin]

AAWWWW! Ron. This one is soo sad. :( It made my heart wrench and stutter. I made my eyes pick with tears.... I hope that you do not feel this way.... Because I believe that you could NEVER be the end of anyone, only their bright happy beginning! :)

Superb job! ^^

[ron]

Thank you Chelsea. Guess I felt a little down last night.

[Konigin]

You are welcome. I am very sorry to hear that. Is everything alright??

[ron]

Thank you. It will pass dear friend.

[Konigin]

Alright. If you need me, I am here. :)

[ron]

Thank you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is filled with so much passionate musing.Awesome pen my dear :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya...;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Eddie Phillips]

Wow! So passionate. I loved the feelings expressed int his poem.

[ron]

Thank you Eddie I'm glade you enjoyed this one.

[Lily Mae]

I think many of us can relate to the depth of emotion in this write. It runs through our veins and down our faces, until the end. Excellent as always..xo

[ron]

Thank you so much Lily..xo

[Mirra]

"I am nothing...

I am the darkest parts of the tears that flow...

in dark lines down your cheeks."

Amazing poem! Really love the lines.

[ron]

Thank you Ink. I have no idea where this one came from.

[Mirra]

Haha it should came from that skillful hand which makes magic when holding a pen :-) Your welcome Ron.

[ron]

You are very kind Ink...:)