Secrets kept

Secrets kept


Secrets kept from the world to see,
secrets that others will never know.

How could someone explain,
what others will not understand.

This feeling deep inside,
I have to keep it from prying eyes.

How it cuts and marks me deep,
the feeling that cries out to be heard.

One day I will tell the world,
but for now I must hide,
what others would not understand.

Reviews

[s y e]

I think we all have secrets that the world isn't ready to now but there will be someone who comes along and you can put your trust in them about specific things. I really loved this.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. That is so sweet of you to say. I have found someone but I am still scared of saying to much :( even though I trust her completely its still hard.

[s y e]

It takes time to gain trust. Just do it when you feel ready. She'll understand.

[ron]

I know and I trust her so much, I feel like I am betraying her by not telling her.

[s y e]

Hmmmm, I don't think so. If it is just a secret then you're not betraying her but if it is going to affect the relationship then I think you should tell her.

[ron]

I know. I don't think it will.

[Stephen]

How could someone explain,
what others will not understand.

~~ Sexy lines ~~ I like the depth of these lines ... so true, so power, the dominance of words are reflected through these precious lines ... It`s an excellent job!

[ron]

Thank you Stephen.
Nice profile picture You must make the girls go wild.

[Konigin]

oooohhhhh Ron! I hope that there is someone in this world who will be able to share your burden. Secrets are a hard thing on a heart.... I hope that all is well and that I am here if you ever need someone around! :) Deeply moving and stirring poem..... ensnared me right from the title! Wondrous piece my friend.

[ron]

Thank you Chelsea. I think I have someone to share my secrets with.
Thank you Chelsea you are very kind to offer.

[Konigin]

You are welcome, on both. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Whenever you are ready everyone who loves you will understand and accept you for who you are.I am wise so believe me :)

[ron]

Thank you dear Vidya. I know, but somethings no matter how harmless they are, are still looked at as being wrong -sighs-

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes that is true .Well here's to in the future people being a little more tolerant of the choices of others,After all it is our life to live not theirs.

[ron]

This is very true. Even if it is legal in one place it may not be in others.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well at least people are realizing that their way is not the only way :)

[ron]

That is true...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

................:)