If time stood still…

If time stood still…

 

 

…would I be frozen in your heart?

 

Would you keep me safe,

protecting my passion?

 

Would I be the thing you visit,

when you're lonely?

 

Would I still be the object of your love?

 

Or would I be just a passing moment,

designed to be your toy?

 

A playing thing you bring out,

when you’re bored?

 

If it meant being with you…

I would be anything you needed me to be.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

Dear friend, I can feel the confusion, the worry in this piece... You feel so deeply and it comes across in your writing... I must say--- it shouldn't be a matter of being "anything you need me to be" it should be that she needs you for who you are, who she is with you, how you make each other feel. You should never just be a toy that is pulled out when one is bored... You deserve infinite happiness sir:)

[ron]

Thank you April. I was kind of in a very submissive mood...;)
But I agree we should not just be toys for the other...xo

[AprilRN1210]

good!! and you are very welcome..

[Lyn Anderson]

Another romantic, sensual write. One minor detail. Third stanza you're instead of your.

[ron]

Thank you KL. Guess I was just in the mood ;)

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Your hung up on the toy part Ron ha ha. I feel better women are in the world than ones like to toy with a man heart and mind. Rather have a ribbon than a string how about you?

[ron]

I kind of like being the toy from time to time. Her in control and I don't have to decide anything...thats kind of erotic for me. But sometimes I want to be in charge. :))

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Good luck Ron.

[ron]

Thanks Jon.

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Welcome Ron:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I am sure you are everything to your woman Red,This was so sweet :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. One can only hope if it will last :(

[Vidya Bacchus]

Of course it will because you will do everything right yes ?

[ron]

In truth I am lost, I am so nervous and sometimes I can't think straight. I'm so afraid something will happen to chase her away or she might find someone else :(

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is you screwing with your own head.Just go with it and it will work out fine.Have I lied to you yet ?

[ron]

I know your right Vidya.
No you have not lied to me.
It's just...I'm just so scared right now.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Chill hunny it will be fine and you will give yourself a heart attack thinking all the ways it could go wrong.Instead think about all the ways it can go right yes?

[ron]

I know your right Vidy. sighing...
I will try, thank you xoxoxo

[Vidya Bacchus]

Welcome :)