Wear something for me

Wear something for me

 

 

It could be red, black, or white,

maybe blue or purple.

 

No matter what the color is,

would you wear something for me if I asked you to?

 

I would love to know, that what you wear,

is private and only for me.

 

Would it make you think of naughty thoughts,

knowing I asked you?

 

Would it make your body tingle in places,

you want me to kiss and touch,

knowing I can picture what you are wearing?

 

Would it help if your pictured my kiss,

on the item I asked you to wear?

 

Would it make it that more exciting?

 

So if the answer is yes (and I hope that it is),

please tell me just what you are wearing.

Reviews

[s y e]

Ha, you men make me laugh so much. This was romantic but also made me laugh as well and Muse's review made me laugh out loud.

Nicely written.

[ron]

Lol...thank you Sye.

[Muse]

Men and their lingerie. I swear this is why no matter how bad the economy gets. Victoria Secret will NEVER go out of business.

[ron]

Thank you...I think.
I never said it was lingerie...it could be a simple delicate chain around her waist with a small jewel in it. Or something else.

[Muse]

Now you are getting too specific. It wasn't my point, and not to be taken literally. This was a lovely write. "lighten up, it's okay...you are too tense and uptight."

[ron]

Lol, well you were right I was thinking of lingerie :)...I just wanted to show it could mean more. And thank you for the review, I am very lightened up :)

[Muse]

Gooooooooooooooood :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those private conversations and photos. Leave us wanting what we cannot have. I enjoyed the poem. Hope and want is all we have sometime. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

Thank you Coyote. Yes sometimes that is all we have.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ron.

[Claire in VA]

This is the first piece of yours
that I've read. All I can say is
that if my loves asked me all
these things, I know, without
a doubt, that I'd say yes to all.
Unique!
~Claire

[ron]

Thank you Claire. That means a lot to me to know someone would for their love.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmmm very interesting to peer into your thoughts.I think your person would be inclined to accomodate your musings because you phrase your lines so well .Great poem Red :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. I can only ask and hope ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and that's all any of us can do :)

[ron]

One day maybe.

[Vidya Bacchus]

One day for sure :)

[ron]

Yes maybe one day :)