Held in time

Held in time

 

 

My heart held in time,

waiting for your warmth,

your passion,

you love,

until you come to me.

 

To feel your soft lips upon my crying heart,

to see the love in your eyes that fills my soul, 

beyond its capacity.

 

Held in time until,

my lips find your heart,

my love caresses your passion,

my eyes see the beauty of your soul.

 

Until my heart is released from time,

I will die in my dream, 

each morning.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

A very moving piece. I think you might have meant your and not you in the fourth line first stanza.

[ron]

Thank you Kl. I think your right.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww this is so sad.Stop it!!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww this is so sad.Stop it!!!

[ron]

I'm sorry Vidya :(
Will a hug make it better?

[Vidya Bacchus]

Don't know why I commented twice but go with the flow I say.Perhaps and cotton candy is a given lol

[ron]

Cotton candy?
I don't understand.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...because you could get away with murder if you gave me cotton candy I love the thing lol

[ron]

Oh I see ;)...got you some cotton candy from the fair ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....okay if its pink you are forgiven for anything lol

[ron]

I made sure it was extra pink and fluffy.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh well that does it then here are the keys to the city and gimme my candy and no you can't have any lol

[ron]

Thank you...now I just need to find the brothel ;)
I would never think of taking any of your "candy" :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....the brothel is that way and "goodboy"

[ron]

;)........

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This is moving and powerful. I like that an enormous amount of passion is compressed into vivid images that fill the mind and heart. The centered format also creates another dimension, like a perfume bottle. Splendid work.

[ron]

Wow...thank you so very much VALORMORE. I am honored you stopped by.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Glad that I did.

[Frieda P]

Touching ron, you trying to break my heart?

[ron]

Thank you Frieda.
I would never try and break anyone's heart Frieda.

[Frieda P]

You like to tug at the heartstrings though dontcha? ;)

[ron]

it's my muse, I had nothing to do with it :)

[Frieda P]

Likely story redwood, that's what they all say ;)

[ron]

I know plead the fifth like someones lawyer told me to :)

[Matching Socks]

Omg!
My knees feel weak.
This is so beautiful. :)

Well done Ron.

[ron]

Wow, thank you Ance :)

[ron]

I didn't mean to make anyone's knees weak.

[Matching Socks]

That is total BS.
I feel like I've said this before. :)

[ron]

But I'm innocent :)-

[A. Amos]

First of all loved the title and the magic of your write made the flavor simply marvelous, one of your finest work..

[ron]

You are most kind Amos. High praise from one such as you, I am honored.

[Matching Socks]

That is total BS.

[Matching Socks]

Oops! That should have gone under mine....

[Matching Socks]

Lol. Lemme try again.

[ron]

LOL...Is everything ok Ance? :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome Ron...

[Matching Socks]

Yes!!!! I replied in the wrong box. I'm such a DUH.

[ron]

Hmm maybe I should hide this one for a while... ;)

[ron]

No your not Ance. I thought is was cute :)

[Matching Socks]

Awww thanks. Clumsy cute girl strikes again!

[ron]

Lol, your not clumsy by any means Ance.