My heart and yours

My heart and yours

 

Would you press your heart against mine,

so they beat as one in time?

 

Could you taste me on your lips,

as we join to become one with each other?

 

Would you sigh your dreams in my heart,

and tell me you love me?

 

Would you peak into my dreams,

and plant the seed of love?

 

All of me dreams of all of you,

and the love you would show me.

 

My heart is yours…

please don’t break it.

 

Reviews

[Kayleigh]

Would she answer yes to all those questions? Beautiful ron, you are quite the romantic, like Dale. Very amazing as always.

[ron]

Thank you very much Kayleigh.

[lakki]

Oh! Really emotional, an appropriate use of words. Loved it.

[ron]

Thank you very much :).

[Eve Ola]

Would you press your heart against mine,
so they beat as one in time?
Would you peak into my dreams,
and plant the seed of love?

Captive verses. overall its great I enjoyed

[ron]

Thank you Eve :)

[Eve Ola]

welcome Ron :)

[Frieda P]

Love the line 'would you sigh your dreams into my heart'....sigh, lovely ron.

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. You are very sweet.

[AprilRN1210]

the last line is always the kicker.. and one of our greatest fears before we hand it over... very sweet write Ron... I think these thoughts have plagued us all at one time or another... well done..

[ron]

Thank you April. Yes it does.

[ron]

Thank you April. Yes it does.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so lovely Red.You have a direct line to woman's heart is all I can say.Loved it :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. I wasn't trying to.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You don't have to try your words are always so heartfelt and sweet :)

[ron]

Your very sweet. Thank you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[s y e]

Ahhhh sighs, this is so utterly breathtaking, Ron. You've touched my heart and put me on cloud 9. I am loving this so much. A beautiful write to read before I went to sleep - thank you!

[ron]

Aww you are so sweet Sye. I'm glad I could put you on cloud 9. Sweet dreams.