I sleep inside of your heart

I sleep inside of your heart

 

 

You took your time,

to tear down my walls,

I never saw you coming.

 

A friendly hello,

as you worked on the crack,

the crack I never noticed before.

 

Then a soft kiss on the cheek of my heart,

the right kiss will do that sometimes.

 

You stayed with me like my shadow at mid-day,

always talking and smiling,

you taught me it was OK to cry.

 

You took me by the hand,

and showed me what love could feel like.

 

You took down enough of my wall,

to allow me to sleep,

inside your heart.

Reviews

[Saddam]

Then a soft kiss on the cheek of my heart,
the right kiss will do that sometimes.

beautiful sentiments... have a nice day my friend.

[ron]

Thank you friend.

[Alfred Kukitz]

A softness seem to rain on the entire poem. Good work!

[ron]

Thank you Alfred.

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, this is amazing, Ron, one of the best you have ever written. The emotions burst off the page.

[ron]

Thank you KL.
I'm reading the collaboration you did with Noel, its really good so far.

[Lyn Anderson]

oh, thank you, I am pleased to hear that. He and I worked well together. I have to go back and clean up some of the dialogue passages, other than that, we are happy with it.

[ron]

You are most welcome, i think you two work well together also.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Dude this one is so romantic and full of love.Sometimes someone sneaks their way into your heart.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes sometimes.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmm maybe your walls have fallen down.

[ron]

Maybe. Or maybe I just never had the strength to rebuild them.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You should be careful with leaving your heart unguarded .

[ron]

I don't leave it unguarded...

[Vidya Bacchus]

You sure about that?

[ron]

I have to believe that Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay if you say so :-)

[NoelHC]

Well done, buddy. Sometimes it sneaks up on, when you least expect it.

[ron]

Thank you Noel, Capt HD :) um I mean HC
Yes it does.

[Matching Socks]

Awww. Triple sigh. Hell, quadruple!
Such a beauty from you my friend. :)

[ron]

Thank you Ana. You are to kind, your making me sigh now.

[John Anderson]

This is a beautifully expressed poem with depth. Nice work.

[ron]

Thank you John.

[ron]

You are to kind.

[Konigin]

Ron. This is BEAUTIFUL. :) I love it.
So much love, so much truth... Amazing and delightful pen my dearest friend.

[ron]

Thank you so much Chelsea dear friend. You are so very kind.

[ron]

Thank you Chelsea dear friend. You are so kind.

[Konigin]

You are welcome Ron. :)
Thank you for your compliment. :D

[ron]

You are most welcome :)
And thank you for reading. :D

[Konigin]

Anytime! XD

[ron]

Thank you Chelsea.