Whispers caught between heartbeats

Whispers caught between heartbeats

 

 

Words of love softly laid,

between heartbeats and whispers.

 

My sighs carried away,

on the moonlight of passion.

 

Dreams quietly laid to rest,

between the pages of poems unwritten.

 

Soft touches no longer felt,

fingers unable to caress.

 

Heart beats felt in the cold darkness,

never to feel the light of love.

 

Still my love holds a flicker of light,

my passion hidden in its secret place.

 

Desires carefully covered,

lest another heart suffer its pain. 

Reviews

[misha]

Such a beautiful yet tragic write. Very well written and it really pulled at my heart.

[ron]

Thank you very much. It's just where I am at the time.

[misha]

You are welcome. It is terrible to hurt but your writting shines through your pain. I hope things get betterfor you.

[ron]

Thank you. I shut my heart and have hidden it away, lest I hurt another.

[misha]

I hope you dont hide it forever. Love is a fickle thing but sometimes it is beautiful. Sometimes we feel past mistakes are inevitable and that they will easily resurface and act out again. Keep striving and I hope all works out for you.

[ron]

You are a very wise person for your age. Yes sometimes love is like that. But pain never goes away it just collects.

[misha]

That is very true, for I understand that personally. The only thing left to do is to be stronger than the pain and to not let our mistakes define who we are. There are too many aspects of this world that can hurt us. If we let it, we could be defeated but that is why we must strive to overcome it. As I read your writing, I can tell you have immense strength for what you have endured.

[ron]

Your words are most kind. But I have no more strength. I guess I have just given up and curl up into the shadows that hold no more pain.

[misha]

I have hidden myself for sometime. Never letting myself love or be loved and it has kept me away from the pain but it has also kept me from happiness. It leaves you in a state of nothing almost. If we hide, the pain will always reside but if we allow ourselves to come out of hiding, at least we can have the happiness that we blocked out. I let myself come out of hiding for someone I trusted and believed in but they broke me in many ways and all I want to do is go back to where I used to be but even through the pain, I had moments of happiness and those are what I hold onto. I hope that ypu build strength and get back out there into the light and out of the shadows.

[ron]

Thank you. For now Its best that I just hide in the shadows.

[misha]

Stay strong and time will heal you.

[ron]

I will try, and thank you for your kindness.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Still my love holds a flicker of light,

my passion hidden in its secret place.



Desires carefully covered,

lest another heart suffer its pain."~ Beautifully expressed, Ron...

Heartbreaking...sigh...~xoxo~

[ron]

Thank you Robbie.

[s y e]

Oh man this is so unbelievably sad, Ron. Can I give you another Noodle huggle? Don't give up and keep your chin up my sweet friend, things will get easier and better. xoxo

[ron]

Thank you Sye. If it gets better then at some point it get worse again.

[s y e]

Not always Ron.

[ron]

I hope you never know Sye.

[s y e]

I'm sorry you're hurting Ron, sending some Noodley hugs your way.

[ron]

Thank you Sye.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh gosh this is so sad.Words of a broken heart.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome buddy.

[Frieda P]

Darkly written in sweet reminisces ron...

Dreams quietly laid to rest,
between the pages of poems unwritten.

Love that stanza...

[ron]

Thank you Frieda.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure ron...smile, it's Frieday :)

[ron]

I will agree to it being Friday, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

oh if you're not fried, you're not doing it right ron....

[ron]

Its my Wednesday.

[Frieda P]

Where are you residing these days, Mars?

[ron]

No security guard. May days off are Monday and Tuesday I work from 10 pm until 6 am the next morning.

[Frieda P]

Ahh no wonder, tough one...