A thousand pieces

A thousand pieces A thousand times it feel, a thousand pieces lie on the ground. This time will be different, this time I will not pick them up. I have no more strength, not even tears will warm my cheeks. This is how fate will keep me safe.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, this is so sad. I want to hug the speaker in this poem. Well conveyed emotion. One thing, "lie" instead of "lay" unless you intended it to be past tense.

[ron]

Thank you KL.
I have no idea what "past tense" is ;)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Don't give on, but also move on. It will probably be hard but you need to let go.

[ron]

Thank you BD.
Maybe.

[s y e]

Don't you give up Ron. You're so strong, you can get through this and like you said to me, there are so any here at WC who will you hold up. x

[ron]

Thank you Sye.
Hey that's not fair using my own words against me..:) xoxox

[Frieda P]

Such a feeling of desperation and reckoning ron....we carry on though, don't we?

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. I don't see what good it will do.

[Frieda P]

I hear ya, but what's the alternative?

[ron]

I can crawl in my darkness and be safe. Never get hurt in my darkness.

[Frieda P]

I totally understand that sentiment, but that's merely existence, not really living....I know that one firsthand...

[ron]

But no pain so it's all good.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sad is what this is.When your heart has been broken time and time again sometimes it seems easier to never bother again but you can never give up on love is what I think.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya but sometimes it's for the best.

[Vidya Bacchus]

If you say so I'll keep my opinions to myself ;-)

[ron]

I always want and need your opinion Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yeah you do lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yeah you do lol