Third degree burns on my passion

Third degree burns on my passion

 

 

I was minding my own business,

without warning it came.

 

It was the hot flash of desire,

that burned my passion into lust.

 

The third degree burns,

worked its way deep.

 

Throughout my body,

it took control.

 

It smoldered and seared,

what resolve I had left.

 

The third degree burns on my passion,

turned to animalistic lust.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Third degrees burns, now that's beyond passion, sounds like one helluva night ron!

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. Only in my dreams :)

[Frieda P]

Oh well...better than nothing I guess, at least you're still dreamin' ron ;)

[ron]

Yes it is.
That seems to be all I have (my dreams).

[Frieda P]

'They' say dreams do come true, it could happen to you. :)

[ron]

For most maybe. But I do have poetry, maybe that will be enough.

[Frieda P]

Umm, poetry can hardly keep you warm at night hon....

[NoelHC]

It would appear Master Sergeant HD has his fire stoked again. Well done buddy!

[ron]

Thank you Noel (Capt HD) but my fire is not going to be stoked anytime soon.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oooh it sounds like Red's about to have himself some fun.This one is hot like ummm third degree burns lol

[ron]

Just a passing fancy Vidya. I really don't have third degree burns on my passion.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol well still maybe you should have yourself some fun.

[ron]

If only I could.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Who says you can't lemme at em lol

[ron]

I need them in person. You are there and I am here.
And no one is here to let it come alive for me, so only in my dreams...

[Vidya Bacchus]

You need to stop being so serious its depressing.

[Lyn Anderson]

Hmm, you fool me. I think it's going to be sad and then it turns into something else. Well done.

[ron]

Thank you KL. You are a sweetheart :) xoxo

[s y e]

Oooooh Ron, I likey! This one was fantabulous. Honestly, what an amazing honest poem. Funny how this can happen, eh?

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I fear my emotions are running uncontrolled and unchecked.
Run for the hills, I can't control it :)