Taken with love

Taken with love

 

 

I would take you into my care and mentor you.
I would show you wonders and all the things you need to know.
Yes you will be punished when you falter, but know it will be out of love.
I will reward you when you behave and show me you’re trying.
I can be loving, and firm.
I will be demanding and strict, but loving and patient.

Will you let me take you?

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

This is a most fascinating piece Ron...I hope I'm not off the mark here, but it almost has the feel of interaction with a pet more than a human lover, with the need to administer discipline at times, and make it clear that you're dictating the terms...having said that, one cannot simply give in to love and let it manipulate you, cuz it will do that if you don't stand up for yourself...so this did have a bit of an ominous feel for me as I read it, but it does epitomize the notion that love is a two-way street that requires give and take, in whatever form it is applied to...well done my friend.

[ron]

Thank you. In some relationships it is the giving in to demands and guidance that can be the most satisfying.

[misha]

This is an interesting write. Very fascinating how one can be inticed by the fantasy of power and caught in the seductive nature of being a strict teacher and mentor. This kept my attention and it was intruiging to read. Great job!

[ron]

Thank you. I hope its not to adult.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmm who knows maybe.......

[ron]

It was rhetorical. I don't think anyone wants me to take them that way.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Why?

[ron]

It was just a poem. Maybe a little fantasizing thats all.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay fine.I am sorry for saying maybe when clearly you already know for a fact its never.

[ron]

Sorry I should not have said that :(
Thank you for your kind words Vidya they mean a lot to me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

No you are right why the heck should I try to force you to be optimistic when you clearly are having none of it.

[ron]

I just need time Vidya.