What would “just enough” feel like

Not sure if there are any typos, guess it really doesn't matter.

What would “just enough” feel like

 

 

Would just a taste of cool spring water,

be enough,

quell your thirst?

 

Would a fleeting soft breeze,

be just the right amount,

to renounce the day’s heat?

 

Could there ever be,

just enough to feel?

 

Could your heart love just enough,

to be called love?

 

Would a true love be just enough,

to be a friend?

 

Could “just enough” be the perfect amount,

to change from lover,

to friend? 

Reviews

[s y e]

There's a sad longing to this one my friend. You've captured the emotions on point again, as always. Amazingly well written as ever

[ron]

Thank you again Sye. I need to stop wearing my heart on my slave but I don't know how.

[Vidya Bacchus]

One wonders and wonders about what is and what isn't. You have penned a thought provoking write here my friend.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Guess that's the philisoficle part of me. Sorry

[Vidya Bacchus]

Why sorry?Its okay to think from time to time but I try not to make it a habit lol

[ron]

lol.......

[MomzillaNC]

Hmm… there's a rather sad longing for something just missed in this poem.

[ron]

Thank you.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.