Trying

Trying

Trying to fill hearts,
trying...

What happened to love?
It fell short when the air cleared.

To many secrets kept,
exposed too late.

Reviews

[misha]

I love the shortness of this piece. It is simple yet powerful. Great write!

[ron]

Thank you Misha. :)

[misha]

You are most welcome :-)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is powerful in its simplicity. Well done. I think you might have meant too late.

[ron]

Thank you KL.
sighs...I'll never get it right.

[Lyn Anderson]

Don't say that, I am not trying to make you feel bad.

[ron]

You haven't made me feel bad KL. I know that spelling and punctuation is not mt strong suite.
I might get frustrated with myself on that, but I will always welcome any help I can get.
I would rather be corrected on all of my spelling and punctuation then to be never told and look like a fool.

[Lyn Anderson]

The beauty is, I am much better looking than spell check:)

[ron]

LOL, yes you are. :)

[kublakhan27]

Secrets are a killer...a heart that holds secrets will struggle to fill hearts, or it will struggle to be filled...you've said much here in a small piece my friend...nicely done.

[ron]

Thank you KK. You hit the nail on the head.
Thank you.

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure my friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I think love is supposed to be understanding.It does not demand you be someone you're not it accepts you for who you are.Short but full of meaning buddy :)

[ron]

Love is...complected. It might accept you for who you are, but what if who you are is not what the one you love can live with?

Not to say they would be wrong just...needing something different.

[Vidya Bacchus]

How can you love someone and not love all of them.And if the one you love can't handle all of you what happens do you change for them or do they change for you?

[ron]

You dont change for anyone. But its the way it is.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I realized there was a time I began changing to be who people wanted me to until I decided "no more"I am me and you accept it or simply you don't.

[ron]

I know how you feel, but when you don't tell someone who and what your like until its to late...well then two hearts get broken.

[Vidya Bacchus]

That's true:)

[Sami Khalil]

A much shorter than your others and different. I like it a lot...Bravo, sir...:)...............

[ron]

Yes it is. Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................