When your lips are so close

When your lips are so close

 

 

In the setting sun you stand with your dress flowing in the wind.

Is it your lips pursed and wanting?

 

I want to hold you tight,

and look in your eyes,

when our lips are so close.

 

Take me in your arms and I’ll take you in mine tight,

take each other in passion.

 

Let me taste you…

spin your head and I’ll be there,

be in your heart and body.

 

I want to be what you want more than life,

your cool smile burns hot in my heart.

 

My love for you,

reaches out to hold you tight.

 

Lips so close,

skin touch,

passions meet,

taste of sinful needs…

 

In the shadows,

desires are met.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[MandaBear]

Wow what a sexy poem Ron :) Makes me kind of wish I could experience this right now. Made my heart feel good ;)

[ron]

Aww thank you Manda.
I know what you mean, I would to.

[redflutterby]

Very sensual write Ron....steamed up my screen. Lol.... ;-)

[ron]

Lol. Thank you RED and I'm glad I could...well I'm just glad ;)

[Fenix Flight]

Beautiful as always ron! I love it. Its so romantic!

[ron]

Thank you Fenix.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ohh what a lovely write.Very sweet and passionate Red :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Red :)

[AprilRN1210]

the beginning was a little slow to me, felt restrained and not as much passion, but you ended strong.. overall nice piece my friend...

[ron]

Thank you April.
I wanted it it to be that way.
Always a strong finish.

[AprilRN1210]

yes, but passion can be sizzling beneath the surface throughout.. but I guess I can see your point.. and always a pleasure Ron

[ron]

Thank you April.
Oh I can have passion sizzle beneath the surface. But I have tried and many do not like it.
So I quell my passion lest it take a dark turn in my writing.

[NoelHC]

Wooohooo I am getting everybody listening to cowboy music. This song is one of my favorites. Sensual, sexy and longing. Nicely written Ron.

[ron]

Thank you Noel.
I do like country, believe it or not ;)

[NoelHC]

Oh, and the "Sensual, sexy and longing." was about your poem, not the song.

[ron]

Thank you Noel.

[Lyn Anderson]

A steamy and romantic write to go with the song.
One minor thing, reaches out to HOLD you tight, you accidentally put an S on the end of hold

[ron]

Thank you KL.
I will change it.