Midnight’s blushing heart

Midnight’s blushing heart

 

 

Your whispered thoughts caress my breath,

as my eye lids fight for one more glance.

 

Softly you touch upon my midnight's dream,

and quench my wanting lips.

 

Your heart presses against mine,

as you lay a thousand miles away.

 

My beating heart blushes,

when you whisper upon a summers breeze.

 

And whispers returned on stardust,

guided by the moonlight's glow.

 

The veil of my love softly embraces your beauty…

a beauty my touch will never know. 

Reviews

[Megan]

I like this. Felt for both you and the moon. Very romantic.

[ron]

Thank you very much.

[MomzillaNC]

Lovely sentiments, elegantly expressed. Why are those whispered moments so alluring… so enticing… so very sexy?

NOTES: "guided by the [moonlight's] glow."

[ron]

Thank you. Yes those whispers can be.
I will fix the typo thank you.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Lyn Anderson]

Such beauty and longing in this romantic verse. Very well done.

[ron]

Thank you KL.
Kind of how I felt in High School all the time.

[Pryde Foltz]

Your heart presses against mine,
as you lay a thousand miles away.

Space and time are nothing to emotions … excellent write, Ron.

[ron]

Thank you Pryde.

[NoelHC]

This is a gentle, loving, longing piece of poetry Ron, well done.

[ron]

Thank you Noel.
Guess I'm back to writing love poetry again lol

[MandaBear]

Awww such a sweet poem :) I really like the last line " The veil of my love softly embraces your beauty.... a beauty my touch will never know" that is so awesome. Great poem Ron :)

[ron]

Aww thank you Manda.
I'm very glad you like it.