When we write

When we write

A Poem by ron
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To a dear friend who I have written with before.

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When we write

 



 

Writing with you is like making love with words.

 

My heart beats faster,

 my breath ragged,

my imagination takes me where only your words can.

 

When I close my eyes your words caress my body,

they send electric sensations throughout my mind.

 

I lick my lips pretending that your words,

are kissing me softly.

 

Your pen touches my body and writes upon it,

and for a moment while I read your words,

I can almost smell your scent.

 

I wish my words could make you feel the same as yours does to me.

© 2015 ron


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613
This was very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed your use of vocabulary!

- Brittney

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Brittney.
613

10 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Well whoever this person is sounds like someone that is fun to write with. I am sure that person feels the same way. Writing with other people can be fun. Sometimes certain people just have a connection when they write that goes beyond words. Great write =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Manda. Yes they are fun to write with.
I hope so.

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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..