Why can’t I?

Why can’t I?

 

 

Why can’t I be open about how I feel and who I am,

keeping it inside cuts in ways no one could see.

 

The scars are invisible,

the tears no one sees.

 

I haven’t the courage,

to be who I need to be.

Reviews

[FlatLineBeauty]

I remember when I was in more we used to talk about this. I think who you keep hidden is beautiful

Xo Karma

[ron]

Thank you very much. Yes I wish we were on more.

[FlatLineBeauty]

As do I my friend. I'm slowly making a come back I guess. I haven't decided if I will post my work yet though

[ron]

I hope we keep in touch my dear friend

[FlatLineBeauty]

Always my dear one! If you're comfortable message me your number or email. I dont talk much but I text a lot lol

[ron]

She will see your number and ask about you.

[Paul Bell]

I would imagine half the worlds population would concur with this. Sometimes you just have to think of yourself.

[ron]

Thank you.

[Brittany Bostic]

I understand that so many people feel like they have to keep who they are inside because of the terribleness on the outside. Have courage. This piece does a beautiful job of telling the tale how it is. It is hurtful and cruel and very unnecessary...We should all be who we are and love who we love without caring what others think. It is hard to be brave when so many want to drag you down.

[ron]

Thank you very much.

[lakki]

Words are easier to be spoken than to be turned into actions, right? Kernel scars are better handled when they are invisible, trust me, once they are out, you will never get the chance to cure them. Well, that's what your thoughts had triggered in me I guess!! Good Poem :) :)

[ron]

Thank you very much.