Emptiness

Emptiness by Poet Ron

Life is full of empty holes.


Emptiness, A hole, has opened to be filled.


Looking down.
I see honor, sorrow, loss and separation.


My loss brings tears,
So much pain!


Emptiness, a chance for a new beginning.
Can this be a good thing?
Holes to be filled with new dreams and other things.


Emptiness, holes flood with passion,
New friends, new dreams, new love,
Open heart and open mind.


Life is full of empty holes,
That need to be filled.


시인 론

"A dream is something that fills up the emptiness inside"

Reviews

[Mike Cole]

Life is full of empty holes and I think deep down we are all longing for something that can be able to fill those holes. God is the only one who can. Great poem you are a good writer keep it up!

[Ronald J Chapman]

Mike, Thank you for the review and kind words. :)

[Betty]

A thought provoking poem. "Life is full of empty holes, That needs to be filled." and dreams are supplements indeed!! Loved it Ronald.

[Ronald J Chapman]

Betty, Thank you for the review and comments. I very much appreciate it.
:)

[Pax]

"A dream is something that fills up the emptiness inside"

Bravo! ~ That is why i never stop dreaming myself...

[Ronald J Chapman]

Pax, Thanks for the review and comments. keep dreaming,

[Broken Wings]

I too like the bold used to highlight certain aspects of the poem. I also like how you spoke of pain and loss but the end was full of new experiences and hope. Well written.

[Ronald J Chapman]

Thank you for the review. i was debating weather to use the bold type or not. Now i am glad i did.
:)

[Knightingale]

I like the use of bold font in this to highlight certain aspects. There's a lot of truth to.this piece. All in all, a well crafted poem. Good job :)

[Ronald J Chapman]

Knightingale,

Thank you for the great comments.

:)

[Knightingale]

My pleasure entirely :)