mistakes

MY thoughts have been clouding up my mind i cant really think straight

I know i can change but i dont know if i want too 

I still cant see the path that 

I walk alone on all the pressure all the mistakes every thing i said on the inside feels wrong

I cant see straight my heart it degrades too i dont know what i want or who i am looking for but i hope i reach the end-line soon i feel like a shadow shying away from the sun its blinding scary and bright shoud i look right into it or cover my eyes 

Its amazing how one single choice alters life and everything around for example when tree falls does it truly make a significant sound i hope it does because once in awhile we all fall down

i'd like to meet the man who still belives everything is okay, everything is alright cause for the majority everything is a hard fought fight, The scars grow bigger then the last a reminder from mistakes of our past. so yet again we all shy away from the sun its blinding bright and scary should we look or should we look for somewhere to hide?

Author's Note

i have no idea what i am doing lol :|

Reviews

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Maybe you have no idea what your doing, but whatever muse has inspired you is amazing!!!! This would be a really awesome song!!! I love this and I understand it as well! Beautifully written and a really good question.

[that-little-green-monst..]

Great job. This poem is amazing! Excellent flow and I love your word choice. I love the last two lines!

[Muse]

you say you have no idea...but yet you do.

Poetry is often just a shadow of our subconsciousness. A memory of a dream. A ramble of words made up to entertain others. On a serious note...your past mistakes, inspire you to purge an emotion. A ripple of of regrets. Nice work.