Resistance is Futile

A poet speaks of his inability to resist the woman of his dreams.

I can’t help but tingle when our eyes connect
And holding your hand amplifies the effect
Roses lean to you, just to catch your scent
I go weak in the knees so I pray for strength

And my mind tells me “resistance is futile“

Intoxicated by your sweeter than wine kisses
Now I really know, what true bliss is.
hoping for love eternal, love unconditional
A Love so potent it could almost be illegal

And my mind tells me “resistance is futile“

 

 

Now I find myself gushing over you
Blabbering about you just being you
I must admit you are my Perfect One
You have even the most beautiful imperfections

And my mind tells me “resistance is futile

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think

Reviews

[J.P.O.et]

Wow really good stuff here
The first few lines really drew me in
'I can't help but tingle when our eyes connect
and holding your hand amplifies the effect'
I love that right there, well done
J.P.O.et

[Amanda]

nicely written...sometimes it is true that 'resistance is futile' as far as matters of the heart. once you find that 'perfect someone', despite their imperfections, it can be a wonderous thing. i love your comparisons.

good job.

Always,
Amanda = )))

[Zephyr]

other than the fact you missed the last quotation marks on the end of the final line (a very minor mistake) i loved this. it's very sensual and the imagery is brilliant.

i think this is a wonderful bit of poetry.

[boldartist]

This is a good poem,am getting from this poem that you can't give up on yourself "resistance is futile.But in some ways it seem to be about loving someone.I give this poem a ten.Thank you for writing this poem rootzpoet.

[No One Important]

I am so glad I stopped by to read this...well written and well constructed... you may want to remove that comma in the beginning of the second stanza but it is very good