With you with me

Realization dawns on an alienated alien

With me around...

                          nothing can ever go  wrong...

even right-now!

                                        But with you around...

                     everything always seems right...

  always somehow...

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Author's Note

That is the way i feel
Do you feel what I feel
the way I do?

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Sounds like our kiddo is love struck...isn't it grand, very cute, creepy pic. ;-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

tee hee im a silly girly now:)

[Frieda P]

Love makes us all sillies. ;-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

sillies fall in love

[Commanda Panda]

I'm always down for spreading the love and infecting humans with alien STDs. Absolutely beautiful piece.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I Feel FINE......Cue guitar.....Nice poem

[Andie]

I thought it was very sweet and cute. I love the spacing of the stanzas as well. It flows nicely.

[Brad]

smitten put simply but with depth...badda bingg

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

u got it rite...:) hey brad thx

[Brad]

no worries, good to read you again!

[shallimarRose]

loved this.. short but well written. Nice form.. shallimarRose

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thank you Shalimar and also for the fr

[Rogue]

Yep, definitely row-man-tick. -grin-

I loved this one actually. Just peaceful and light thoughts to make one smile. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

happy happy feeling

[Betty]

Strong, authentic feelings defined in such a short and beautiful way. I loved it!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i tried to do just that and very much thanks:)

[Astro]

Short and romantic. Great way to elicit such thoughts and feelings, lyrical even.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thank you ASTRO...its nice to have you review

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

My friend, I adore this one, dunno why, it's just cute :D
I feel green all the way reading this haha!

- Elisa

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

tis was meant to make u feel thata way...green hahah.
heya Eliza thankanku

Heya :D welcomewelcome !!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hahaaaaaaalrightyrightyright