Unbalanced Elements

Unbalanced Elements

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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When things just dont seem to go your way...when it just doesnt seem right for you and for your spirit..

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Unbalanced Elements!

UNBALANCED ELEMENTS
Fellow-Human......
Its good to hear you speak your heart out!!
Be what you want to be....be what you are meant to be...be what you are!
Do you know....we all are made out of 4 elements....AIR...FIRE...WATER...and...EARTH.
Some of us have a little more of this and a little more of that...
but on the whole...the total volume is equal for all.

Those who have EARTH in excess...enjoy life to the fullest...
they ravish on the bounty of nature and are dreaded to hear of Death.....
These are called the `Sons of the Earth`.They are sensational. They have to see to believe. These kind of people are also having an attraction towards Fire.

Some have more WATER...in their constitution....these are the dreamers.....
they retract in their Shell of dreams..in times of adversity...blissfully ignoring reality...but these people have more "feel", charm and an insight...

Some have more AIR.... and literally so...these type people
strut around the globe with the grace of a peacock and the authority
of a Royal Lion....they have dreams too...and unlike their watery counterparts,
they strive to make theior airy dreams come true...but are rarely in touch with their innermost feelings and that of others too...
and they start believing that they are the hand that controls the chisel...
the carvers of their own destiny...but they are also the thinking type...

and Lastly..the FIRE..types...the Fiery ones....the ones with their intuition at its peak...they will not be bound to any man-made religion or order...
these people are born with zeal enthusiasm and determination
with a generous dose of jealously, anger, hatred and destructive
intentions......these are the ones who create small ripples in the pool of tranquility...
leading on to a Tsunami of fire which laps everthing and everyone in its stride....
.it does not rest till it reaches the bank...the bank of destruction,
devoid of noble intention...
The AFTERMATH......A zillion n one dead hopes dashed to pieces against the rocks....
dead long before the cliffs could cut them to shreds....burnt long ago in that fiery inferno....
dead past the magik cure of the country witches soothing salve...
stolen from the fire elves themselves....

Fellow-Human.....
this whole universe of ours is a dream a long-short dream...
long enough to bear grudges against our own kind...
short enough to pass by with the blink of an eye....
We all need to balance our ELEMENTS.....none more; none the less.
Its this perfect balance that makes this dream go on.....
the dream called life.... ELEMENTS in perfect Harmony...
couples in blissful matrimony.....no more heartache ; no agony....
no gold vaults..no stashed money....
no cursing stinging bees ...we steal their Honey....
the only logical solution...for them, you and for me!

© 2011 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
I hope I don't sound like I am preaching.....
not I ..no....I am just sharing a part of my existance with you...which is your birthright too..

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Your imagery is very good here. I love the line with the 'authority of a royal lion'. It's quite interesting that you use the basic natural elements to convey the message that we should accept each other and live our lives to the fullest. At least, this is what I got from it. It says, perhaps, that we should strip ourselves down to our basics and take away all the rubbish society has piled on us. Well done. My negative is the structure and grammar. I know poetry doesn't necessarily require grammar, but double exclamation marks are never acceptable. The structure also is a bit frayed - it does nothing to highlight your message, it just seems very random. Overall, though, good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

Hi MoonA....i will listen to you and try to restructure my work....thank you for your lovely inputs:.. read more



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Great work! Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

Thx Dt...do drop in more often
I really like the line

"this whole universe of ours is a dream a long-short dream...
long enough to bear grudges against our own kind...
short enough to pass by with the blink of an eye...."

Keep swinging on that spiral.

Posted 14 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

love that verse as its my fav too...yeh we r two peas in a pod:) thx Tkess
wow !! great, i loved it

Posted 14 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

thx Pradnya and pls come back to where u belong...right here:)
AWESOME!
It feels like a god was talking in the poem and cool picture too!

Posted 14 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

I am fortunate that you help me see the God in you too..thx Pzw
I must tell you that this is a delight to read. Your imagery is gripping and propels me into a every evolving world of inspiration.

Posted 14 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

im glad you think that way RS...:) u are great
As above so below.. balance in all things.. You know I love this :) x

Posted 14 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

i know u do...and remember sweetheart, i heaven't forgotten you:)
We need to balance all four elements or we become immersed with the things in life that lead through to greed and too much power! This is absolutely stunning poetry love...one of your best! I adore this :)
Live in harmony...balance and recognise the earth has a heartbeat...we are small in comparison...would do some people good to remember that! lol
Beautiful work love!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

Hello Poppy you always say such nice things about my work and its a feeling thats mutual between us... read more
Great job.
So inspirational.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 14 Years Ago


 Tasha

12 Years Ago

Hey, no problem :)
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

keep visitin
 Tasha

12 Years Ago

I will, I hope u do as well
Inspirational. Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

12 Years Ago

How are you my friend...you know i really miss hearing you..thx:)

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