When our feet MET

When our feet met....

                        
for the first time

they glided with delight

as the floor opened wide

we slowly slithered to the middle

while standing under the crystal ball

 

of lights

spotting us

 

as though it was a moonlight dance

under the stars

from all angles

we started to glow

with radiate smiles

you could see us for miles

As our arms stretched

to reach for the touch

we embraced with a feel of

 

sweaty  palms

and heart felt races

The floor felt polished

like never before

as we begin to swing

I twirled under your arm

and swung around

while chasing your feet all around 

I could feel the vibration

lift me up

in your arms

 

holding me there

and gazing into your eyes

I waited for that special kiss

but it wasn't ready

you see..

for we are having to much fun

 

dancing

 

    grooving

 

       and bumping

 

to the beat

 

''dance''

 

   ''dance''

 

 

      ''dance''

 

 

''pick up your feet''

 

it's moving our bodies

 

as we fly

 

into the night

 

lets keep on jumping

 

into the morning light

 

this feels dynamite

 

as I jumped high and low

 

to the dj's beat

 

spinning wheels of steel

I'm liking the way

this music

  is making me feel 

but it's getting late 

you know... 

 
and my feet must go

for we won't say goodbye

we will sing a lullaby

and just wait for these feet to meet

 

again! :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'When our feet MET'
maria (rose)
You know it's been a long time since Iv'e had the pleasure the dancing expeerience which you wonderful poem suggests. The words are a joyful depiction of rejoicing in life for it's own sake. I really liked this:
"as the floor opened wide" One little sentence just gave the whole theme of wild abandon.Also darling:
"while chasing your feet all around"
Layout, structure, fonts....contrasting and so effective! I had fun too. Thank you and blessings,
Kathy
PS I hope you don't mind a new reader just popping by.

[Muse]

Clever use of words and font. I could feel the rhythm behind your inspiration. An intimate encounter that evolved around some very fancy foot work. Well penned. :)

[maria ( rose)]

awe ❤️ Thank You So Much!! :)

[MeratheRestless]

I think this is very interesting and unique, especially the imagery.

[maria ( rose)]

Thank You so much:))

[Anita Singh]

"holding me there
and gazing into your eyes
I waited for that special kiss
but it wasn't ready
you see.."
I was expecting a kiss to happen here but then suddenly the beat escalated to "DANCE DANCE DANCE" and I was like LOL. Still hope that their feet met again on the dance floor and this time they shared a kiss.

[maria ( rose)]

aww love your review thank you once again for your time

[Stephen]

Lol! This poem made me laugh! I hope, you'll meet your feet with your someone again soon. The combination of love, feelings of having desire of an every tiny drop of love at night when the world becomes silent but the hearts in a lonely room in a bed beat up till the dance doesn't end. Your feelings of being uplift by someone's strong because your love's strong and true and how you've expressed your all love feelings into the words which all what that makes this poem very beautiful reading.

Lovely poem which's a combination of many forms of love. Love becomes strong when your alone with your someone and the night touches the sky and the lit's off but the room lighten up with the lit of your love cause the the feelings always kindle the fire everywhere and when if we combine all these perspectives then we find one perspective which's "Love" and that's all I've founded in your this beautiful poem.

Keep up the great work!

[maria ( rose)]

ahh my your reviews are so beautiful & touching. You got right to the core of the poem:) and that's what I like when you can read and feel the emotions being expressed..thank you so much Steven.:)

[Stephen]

I never read stuffs but always feel 'em what the stuffs want me to because I do believe if you don't feel the stuffs, you don't enjoy the stuffs and if you don't enjoy reading stuffs, you never come to learn the beauty of being loved. So, that's all wha...what all I can say. Am glad my reviews touch your beautiful soft heart. I'd have my honor to uplift you if I'd have that guy but am not that lucky guy so, All I can do is wish for you for your happy life with your someone. May your someone always love you the way he lives.

The pleasure's mine, Maria!

[Cryingkate]

Neat Marie..I just found this and happens to be the day of this morning when I awoke singing and dancing the Hokey pokey and then the Saints go Marching In.

[maria ( rose)]

hhaa love them both!!! thanks for stopping by:))

[Cryingkate]

Why Thank you for the dance :-)

[maria ( rose)]

my pleasure :))

[00000000000000000000000..]

I was wondering what the song was :)))))))))))))))))))))) you saved that part:)))))))) Very very good job:)))))))))) I loved it

[maria ( rose)]

hahaaa, always save the best for last. thank You for reviewing : )))

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Your very welcome:))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[wordman]

this sounded like a romance was started on this dance love the music choice
ron

[maria ( rose)]

thank you so much and also for the friendship:)

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Debbie_Philly]

I LOVE it !!! I love the style and the rhythm and the flow... and it made me want to DANCE !! :) Great Piece Maria !!

[maria ( rose)]

THANK YOU Deb!!♥ glad my poem came alive haha
just having fun with the whole concept.:) thanks for stopping by,, I'll be visiting your page :))

[ron]

Beautiful. I wish my first dance was this special. I would dance with you anytime if it where even a shadow of this poem of yours.

[ron]

You are most welcome Maria. If you don't mind I would like to have this poem as a memory of a perfect first dance I never had.