Summertime Blues

I see you brought some news © 2016 maria ( rose) my song lyrics..

                                    Summertime Blues

                                    I see you brought 

                                    some news

                                    drinking my wine 

                                    and walking along the avenue

                                    people come and people go

                                    they make you feel 

                                    like letting go

                                    a sweep of hope

                                    left in the air

                                    shattered pieces everywhere                      

                                

                                    from the trail

                                    left behind 

                                    words failed far and wide

                                    the temperature began to rise

                                    faster than the sunrise

                                    people come and people go 

                                    they make you feel 

                                    like letting go

                                    a sweep of hope 

                                    left in the air

                                    shattered pieces everywhere

                                    from the trail left behind

                                    are the strings 

                                    caught on the line

                                    will you still be mine  

                                    a sweep of hope 

                                    left in the air.

                                   

                                 

                                    

                                   

                                                            

Author's Note

my song lyrics
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Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

Sadness mixed with hope in this writing. At least that's the message that comes across to this reader. We all have to keep hope alive!

[B. Boileau]

[Oooooohhhhhmmmmmm. Fresh ink in your quill ! This piece gives a sense of a new begining, spring is just around the corner and the sweep of hope is in the air
a perfect morning read ! Yet another excellent write!
: )

[maria ( rose)]

nice review!! Thank You Bill. still not sure how I want the ending to go I want to keep the rhyme scheme going without sounding to tacky. But will see how it goes along the way..:) Hope is in the air..for sure !!!