rejection six

When you hurt her you  hurt me
now you try to tell me that you love me
so why the lies and past regrets
or is that more of just a threat
you've lied about lies
and cheated the cheated
old cries and past forgiven
but this is new even for you
it's low and twisted just like you
so here's goodbye and audios
to a boy whose passed is horribly gross
don't come back it's pointless to
because all of us are through with you
congrats you've got rejection six 
in the two days since you've started this

Reviews

[BeautifulDisaster]

nice job.
it was flowing nicely and girls can relate to this.
keep it up. :)

[Jessi Webb =)]

This is really good ! It shows how to handle that guy who just won't leave you alone !

[Shelby Baker]

Wow.
Reading this you kept me in and interested until the ending.
I loved how it flowed and you could just picture it all..sorta.
Could use this in many ways.
very nice!