The dog from Manila

My first attempt at a limerick...

 

There once was a dog from Manila,

Who's color was that of vanilla.

Imagine my disgust,

When I saw a dark crust,

On his butt the size of Godzilla.

Author's Note

Haha! I just felt like doing a limerick. Please comment and tell me if it's funny and nonsense enough. :D

Reviews

[valineco]

Haha LOL That was quite hilarious.

By the way I think "who's" is supposed to be "whose".

[Cello]

It's funny and amusing. I'm not the poet type of person but yours made me laugh.

[Lorraine]

LOL. What a joke this poem is. Really funny. I imagine your face when you see that Godzilla size crust. LOL that's much more hilarious. Short but really good.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[DanaRegen]

Bravo, Bravo!
I dont know much about limericks, but this was a fantabulous poem. You really know how to put a smile on my face. Nice job, and thanks for submitting it to my contest.
Great job!

[Alice Oiseau]

Manila?!
Kamusta?

Limericks are great for a laugh. This certainly provided one.

Cheers.

[Michelle Long]

Catchy:D That would make a lovely children's song.:D

[Vain Apocalypse]

This has been the first time a poem has made me laugh in months. Congratulations.

[Sarah Hawkinson]

lol that was hilarious.