Electric fan

A Poem by R. Cygnet

Another haiku ;P

A peaceful evening

The sound of my electric fan

Lulls me to sleep.

© 2009 R. Cygnet

Author's Note

I wrote this one some time ago. I have a habit of making haiku out of everyday things. :)

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TapestryLange

This haiku is probably the one I enjoyed most of those of yours I've read this morning. I really appreciated the everyday nature of the piece and its simplicity. After all, that's what the form is all about! You did a remarkable job of capturing the moment. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frances O'Neill

Sometimes that is all it takes to get you nodding! Nice haiku!

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like your haiku habit! expressing things in poems is much better than just saying, "the fan made me fall asleep." :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 10, 2009
Last Updated on April 10, 2009

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R. Cygnet

Philippines

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I've always loved writing. It could be anything from a vivid and strange dream, to a random thought that intrudes my mind while I'm brushing my teeth. The problem is, I rarely finish what I wri more..