Big Smile

 

“Blue.           Daddy’s Blue….

 

                Orange…….                       yellow.”

 

                       with a giggle

 

“Oh,       you meant the light on daddy’s face………………….from the T.V.”

 

“Yes.

                  Blue…..                        Yellow.”

 

“O.k.        o.k.                                 I Love You.

                                    Now go to sleep.”

 

 

 

“Blue.”

 

“Me Me.”

                                                   

 

breath

 

 

touch my chin and cheek

 

 

“Red.”

 

  laughing          “Sleep!”

 

“Blue.”

 

 

Kiss nose

 

“Me Me.”            big smile

 

 

 

“Orange.”

 

 

Reviews

[Greyson Davison]

this is so cool because it's really godd and I'm in it. . .

[Daniel Stark]

This is really touching. It is photorealism in poetry as well, you can visualize the children and the light on the father's face, and hear them in 3-d sound.

[Dan Bradley]

dude this is truly awesome. your use of structure here completely serves it's purpose. as i scrolled down i heard voices in both ears...
insane. :-D
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[Kari [io]]

this was great. i wanted more, though. reminded me of sleepovers, silly things we thought were hilarious and parents from the other room screaming to be quiet and go to bed. classic.

[Hedra Helix]

A haha I love it that blue moment flicker flicker how long did the code take:) rad for patience and thanks for the beautiful familiar blue seconds flicker flicker...light and lovely