Surf's Up

Surf’s Up

 

try to flood my battened-down heart with your fury

and I will respond with gales of laughter

you cannot categorize me

or predict what I will do

when you surge into my life

with your eye on the prize

 

I won’t be taken

I won’t relent

I’ll stand my ground

with firm intent

 

beat on my door

and whip me about

but I’ll see tomorrow’s light

as I usher you out.

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

controlling our own situations an important part of life
worded with emotion and enjoyable to read
like the title choice with the contents it shows thought'
and whip me about- like how that reads
thank you for sharing

[rubie]

It really is all about empowerment.

Thank you so much for your kind review. Much appreciated.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is kind of how i feel in general and in specific right now..

screw it all...i'll take care of me.

potent write.

[rubie]

thank you so much for the read and the wonderful review, jacob. much appreciated.