Body Language

Body Language

 

connected at the core

riding wave after wave

in a timeless ocean


we fall breathless


sucking at the universe


for precious air


while hearts pound 
explosively

and
 hands are left to speak


where there is no 
resonant voice


to be heard

and 
nothing left to do 


but smile

Reviews

[...]

Glorious poetry!!! You got a super- ma'am soul full of dynamite poetry . Rubie. The universe speaks :))))

[rubie]

You are most kind, lynn.
Thank you for your visits. Much appreciated.

[sereenaoutloud]

Sorry I'm totally stalking your page lol

This just flows so effortlessly and wow is it beautiful
and hands are left to speak

You capture this perfectly, when no words are needed and the actions speak for themselves !!
Love this! :)

[rubie]

Don't mind the stalking at all....
I appreciate the visit and the comments.

[Adam Adams]

For a second, I thought that your inner voice's being liberated from your heart/spirit to this page & speaking well to readers. I must keep this poetry saved in my general reading so as I could read it whenever time gets me the pies of winds. Beautiful imagery you've painted 'pon words! Enjoyed it to the fullest!

[rubie]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it very much. Glad you enjoyed the piece.

[wordman]

sounds like your all choked up,great image

[rubie]

Could be...

Thank you for stopping by.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[jeannemarie coulter]

drawing life from the universe itself...wow...i love the image you create...leaving behind only smiles...a fine penning, indeed!

[rubie]

Thank you for your kind words.
Appreciate the review.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ahhhhh.....a passionate build up. Nothing else matters but the two hearts pounding and the four hands touching. Wonderful. Lydi**

[rubie]

Thank you for your kind words, Lyndi!

[Miss Sharon]

Beautifully penned Rubie! I love these creatively poetic lines...hands are left to speak 
where there is no 
resonant voice 
to be heard. Lovely! ~Sharon

[rubie]

Thank you for stopping by and leaving such kind words.

[~]

What a wonderful way to covey these feelings. I felt like I was in a gondola while reading it :D lovely!

[rubie]

Thank you so much for your kind words! Love that it made you feel this way....

[....................]

my favorite, universal language... the physical movements in this piece fulfil the title's promise and I am left smiling at the volumes spoken in that smile... bravo, Rubie... :)

[rubie]

Thank you so much for your kind review, FT

[....................]

my pleasure. as always

[jacob erin-cilberto]

now this is a language that is universal...a poem that is also...although i might have a slight inkling as to what inspired it.

[rubie]

thank you for your review and kind words.