Falling

Inspired by this morning's early walk

Autumn’s cool promise

barely there beneath the warmth

welcomed as a kiss

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I find it quite exciting, being the first day of September! I look forward to the holidays much like a child, and already my anticipation is growing!

I jog every day myself. It's a fabulous time of day, in the morning...the earlier the better.

Such a lovely offering to autumn, Rubie!

[rubie]

One of my favorite ways to wake up my senses is to take a walk during an early autumn morning. I love to feel my lungs filling with the crisp, cool air. Exhiliarating!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I agree. There's truly nothing like it...and it's free! ; )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

autumn is my favorite season, the kiss is so sensual, and you capture both so well in this perfect senryu...

j.

[rubie]

my favorite season too....
thank you for the kind review, my friend

[SleeplessVolcano]

Beautiful senryu! I like the contrast of cold with heat......and also the contrast....where nature is moving towards stagnation, love is growing, nonetheless.....:)

[rubie]

Thank you for your wonderful review!!

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ah, I love this so much...what a great sentiment in anticipation of autumn...it is good to be inspired and to fall :)

[rubie]

Yes, it is...
So glad you like the piece. Thanks for your sweet review.

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I did, very much... you are welcome :)

[rubie]

My first attempt at senryu.....

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I would call this a great success :)

[rubie]

Thanks for the encouragement, my friend.

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You are welcome :)