Maelstrom Madness

Maelstrom Madness

 

Tumultuous times

Emotions in disarray

Pandemonium

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Isn't this everybody aged 12-19?


(I like it when it doesn't take a lot of words)

[andrew mitchell]

So condensed, so much is said in an excellent senryu. Mayhem indeed lol!

[rubie]

Thank you for you kind review

[Kelly Scheppers]

Like FT, you have a way about the senryu, Rubie...

[rubie]

Thank you, Kelly. It was his that inspired me to try my hand at them.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...how funny, me too!

[rubie]

Not surprising. His work is inspirational. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

extremely clever wordplay...this senryu shows much torment within the heart and soul.

[rubie]

thank you for your kind review, my friend.
your visits are always much appreciated.