Abort Take-off

Abort Take-off (A senryu)

 

Roar down the runway

G forces press against me

No wind ‘neath my wings

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

A beautiful senryu Rubie!

[rubie]

Thank you for your kind review, Sharon!

[andrew mitchell]

Sometimes life is hard and you're grounded, but love finds a way to lift your wings eventually just has to be a long runway!!!

[rubie]

Very true...
Thank you for your review, and the visit.

[andrew mitchell]

most welcome I like your style!

[Adam Adams]

Ah, it's been in ages .. reading your work!

It's all 'bout the ups and downs of life that either takes one beyond horizons or leave one lone behind frozen winds. Kinda deep poetry (senryu) you've come up with. Interesting... how you capture life or its moment in few words. Nice shot!

[rubie]

Thank you so much for your kind review.
Welcome back!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we just give up on life and love...instead of a Highway to Hell, it is a runway...yet we still can't get out of our own way.

[rubie]

so true, my friend.
thanks for the review.