Keeping me from You

Keeping me from You

A Poem by Aliza

Steel grey sky

Blue glowing snow

Too deep for me.

 

Almost gone

Enough remains

Keeping me from you.

 

Fun at the start

Annoying in the middle

Aggravating now.

 

Snow, snow, snow

Blanket the ground

Kepping me from you.

 

 

© 2008 Aliza


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I love this. It has great rhythm. Each stanza is constructed so well. If it were a song the chorus would be: "fun at the start ..."

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Aliza
Aliza

Olympia, WA



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I am 20 years old. I am a student at Evergreen State College. I want to inspire the un-inspired. I wish for the ones who have no more wishes left. Working with youth who are forgotten, unwanted and u.. more..