Build or Destroy

"Every act of creation is first an act of destruction" - Pablo Picasso

We are remnants of a flawless tragedy,

A cataclysm of love and disarray,

Enamored by the rubble of our construct,

Dancing in the shadows of demolition,

 

Caressed by the embers of a dying fuse,

Landing gently in the swell of my palms,

Eyes closed looking up at heaven,

For a moment to relish the smoky peace,

 

 Landscape marred by the fallout of pride,

Worn smiles converge in symbolic strength,  

To honor the chaos of yesterday’s lore,

Re-purposing what others left to discard,

 

We remain casualties of the disorder,

Forgotten spoils in a field of debris,

Our splendor rests within the wreckage,

The blissful afterglow of warring hearts.

Reviews

[Francis Orion]

Very moving. I love the Piscasso quote heading into the poem. It really reminds you of the tragedy of destruction and yet we persevere as we rise from the ashes. I still remember the disbelief of the events as they unfolded, as many do. This poem is fine representation and memorial to such a tragic event. This is excellently written. Great poem, my friend!

[rudelizard]

Thank you very much Francis for the kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to review the piece and I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Francis Orion]

My pleasure

[H. E. Schreiter]

I love the descriptiveness (I don't think that's even a word, but whatever) of your writing!

[Cris Roley]

You're poetry is great man

[rudelizard]

Thank you very much Cris! I appreciate the kind words and you taking the time to read this poem.

[katie]

Very moving! A powerful piece! I love the third stanza! Beautifully written! Keep writing!

[rudelizard]

Thank you so much Fire! Your encouraging words mean a great deal to me and I am truly glad you enjoyed this piece. I look forward to returning the compliment very soon!

[katie]

You are very welcome! I'm sorry I'm slow to review. (Stay at home mom with a very active little one!) but I promise to read through and review more of your works! ^_^

[rudelizard]

No worries. I totally understand. I have a 3 month old daughter. I'm in no hurry here, just glad we have this outlet to express ourselves and share with others of like-mind.

[Insight "MH"]

Powerful write. Thank you for sharing.

Insight.

[rudelizard]

Thank you for taking the time to check it out. I appreciate the kind words.

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome.

[Hiroshi Masters]

Wow so poetically powerful written. I like how your words flow! Great concept. I enjoyed for sure!

[rudelizard]

Thank you so much Hiroshi! I appreciate your review and kind words. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Regards!