dawn arising

dawn arising

A Poem by ruth

the air all around feels great against my skin.

it’s liberating to take deep breaths of the cleanness.

 

a first light.

 

coolness surrounds me.

© 2017 ruth


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excellent wordsmithing ... thank you


Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow. I can almost feel myself talking a breath of cool air.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

like an early May morning---or a crisp October one---such perfection ----love that crisp feeling.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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