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Ashes to ashes,
and dust to dust.
My passionate blades,
are covered in rust.

I'm gasping for breath,
it's all I can muster.
What I wouldn't give,
to bring back their luster.

that shine, the glimmer,
it's just what i saw.
you opened your eyes,
not one single flaw.

i kissed your lips,
but you turned away.
you've never looked back,
why couldn't you stay.

and now i am sitting,
alone on my bed.
just counting the things,
that we left unsaid.

the letters you wrote,
could make my heart soar.
i'm high as a kite,
that fell to the floor.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

my passionate blades covered with rust,grasping for breath
would give it all ,just bring back the lustre..
that shine ,that glimmer i just saw once you opened your eyes
i kissed those lips ,but no ,you turned away
you never looked back ,never stayed
and i am sitting alone ..counting things left unsaid
the letters you wrote made my heart soar
high as a kite that fell to the floor
what lovely write,little sad ,but so inspiring so right
so tender and emotional..just loved what you said..
lovely write..