My Mother

During last Mother's Day I wrote this poem.

O my mother
Who else other
Care me like you?
Because you are my passport,
To my life-port.

When I was born
As the loved one
Of my mother
There is no other
Instead of her
Who cared me so
When I was born and so.

Author's Note

Please see if I made any mistake.

Reviews

[Sydnye Louise]

I don't see any mistakes, but I'm not reliable with things like that. lol.
sweet poem, i like it. :)