Shatter
A Book by Ryan Hill
When a mysterious disease hits the Earth, wiping out the entire adult population, the youth of the world is left to fend for themselves. 
© 2012 Ryan Hill
Author's Note
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Any criticism is appreciated, but I'm mostly looking for OVERALL things to fix, not the specifics. So, if you spot an over-arching problem, that's what I'd like to hear about. If you can't find any, that's when you can start picking out the little details.
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Added on August 9, 2012
Last Updated on August 9, 2012
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Ryan HillBoston, MA
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A young author, looking to see if his work is any good. more..
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