The Bright Sun

 The sun shines bright in the morning light

  as the moon had the previous night

Bright and full it broke the haze

  people look in a daze

They stare until their eyes can't bare,

  the bright rays and the glare.

Reviews

[Kaitlin]

wow this is impressive.
i really like this :)

[Becca :)]

this is very nice. i really like it. its always nice to look at the sun. nice work. =]

short and crisp.

good use of words and form.

[-!katie!-]

very niceee (: