To Be In Your Head

There's nothing for me to do

I've done all I can do for you

All that can be asked of me

I used it all on you

 

Probably a waste of my time

But there may be hope

No one knows for sure

 

My fate lies in your hands

And to know what you are thinking!

If I only knew.

Please let me know.

It is killing me inside

The longer it takes the worse I will become.

Reviews

[Daniel]

Nice read. It showed the internal conflict between you and the person this is about.

Title idea: um.... what about.. "To Be In Your Head" or "Death from Inside" OR "Internal Suicide"

I was just thinking of titles at random and those were the first that popped into my mind. I was trying to come up with a title that would deal with what the poem is about. Hope they help. =D

[Shannon]

Overwhelming Desperation... That would be an amazing title. =P