A Different Friend

Your words lift my heart and your smile makes me high;

And although it’s hard in person, we always find a way.

On any day your simple remarks create the tie that holds our bond together;

like hunter and prey.

 

As we talk at night I fall asleep on you. and you on me,

Along with the way you take my words and change their meanings is astounding.

And I know in my heart that this will last forever.

 

Author's Note

My friend asked me to write something for him...
Things are now different so I don't really think this anymore.

Reviews

[Kaitlin]

Ok what friend? And why was i not informed of this? And you fell asleep with him?! now this has gone way too far.... :P

[Wharton]

But you felt that way when you wrote it so it is true emotions. And it was a very sweet poem, I'm sure he was pleased when he read it. It's a very lovely poem and you should be proud!

[Deepshikha]

Oh, this is very cute. It seems like there's something more going on than friendship...like that first, innocent crush...heh. [not that there is, or anything!]

[Becca*Type2012]

Very beautiful poem! I loved how you used a romnantic story line. It just adds to the poem. Beautiful work. You must realy like your friend. :-)