Long Time Away

It's been a few days since we last talked, and now the seconds stretch on forever.
It's been a long time since I've seen your face and the passing time feels like eternity.
I can't help but to think the worst.
I can't keep holding on when I don't see what's left to hold on to.
My mind is spinning in circles attempting to think of a plausible reason for your absence.
My mind can no longer comprehend anything that anyone tries to tell me.

I don't know what happened, and no one but you can help.

Reviews

[J.R Schlievert]

Rachel, this probably says a lot. You've lost somebody near and dear to you. Your lost soul trying to find your other half. And once you think you found them, they're gone. Somewhere in the world they exist, but sadly it's not on the same world that you're living.
Brilliant structure to the poem, length is not an issue. It has enough to keep me satisfied. Which is the only thing I would care if. I have no complaint, and if I did bear a very small.
Excellent work!

[izzy(:]

From what i get out of this, someone has left you, someone close. if that is it, then i can really relate. i really liked this.

[Lexi Nicole]

I love this piece! It's beautifully written and it has so much emotion in it. Brilliant, great work!

-Howl

[Essie]

rachael, i really love this one. the repetitive beginning of several of the lines really adds to the overall flow of the poem and i was definitely captivated by this piece. overall, it kept me questioning throughout. Great write!!!!

[Deepshikha]

...good god...Rachael, you are an absolutely brilliant poet.
So much emotion! I love this! :D